Pete Donacek - Revision history

Infobroker: updates

2017-03-20T17:19:23Z

updates

Astrozac at 07:11, 19 December 2016

2016-12-19T07:11:36Z

Infobroker: cleanups

2014-10-28T21:25:32Z

cleanups

Astrozac: Singular unless I don't know something about the title...

2014-10-24T06:02:19Z

Singular unless I don't know something about the title...

Infobroker at 17:39, 23 October 2014

2014-10-23T17:39:37Z

Infobroker: he's a Doormen

2014-10-23T17:38:51Z

he's a Doormen

Infobroker at 17:31, 23 October 2014

2014-10-23T17:31:30Z

Infobroker at 17:16, 23 October 2014

2014-10-23T17:16:59Z

Astrozac at 06:17, 6 May 2014

2014-05-06T06:17:47Z

Astrozac at 07:24, 23 April 2014

2014-04-23T07:24:07Z

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-A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] in 1988. He bounced around from odd job to odd job until he landed work as a Doorman at the Astro City [[Classic Hotel]]. Initially, he had neutral feelings about living in Astro City with all of the heroes, villains and other assorted supernatural happenings, until one night he wandered down the wrong alley. [[Ragged Tom]] and his [[Ragamuffins]] were ready to pounce on Pete, when the [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] came to his rescue. The incident shook Pete and he decided to hightail it out of Astro City once he had enough money to set down roots elsewhere.
+A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] in 1988. He bounced around from odd job to odd job until he landed work as a Doorman at the Astro City [[Classic Hotel]]. Initially, he had neutral feelings about living in Astro City with all of the heroes, villains and other assorted supernatural happenings, until one night he wandered down the wrong alley. [[Ragged Tom]] and his [[Ragamuffins]] were ready to pounce on Pete, when the [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] came to his rescue. The incident shook Pete. He decided he was going to leave Astro City pronto, once he had enough money to set down roots elsewhere.
 [[image:PeteToTheRescue.jpg|500px|center]]
 But in 1991, on the verge of having the funds to leave, an ancient tribe of demi-gods called the [[Destructoids]] awoke and rampaged through Astro City. Pete saved a young girl from falling debris during the giant demi-gods battle with [[Honor Guard]]. While it re-aggravated his old hockey injury and forced him to use a cane, the experience gave Pete a new insight about this metropolis called Astro City. In that moment, it had become '''his''' city and in a very special way.
-Today Pete serves as the senior Doorman at the Classic. He likes to look out for and take care of the newcomers to the city, pointing them to tourist spots as well as keeping tabs on media reports of where the hot spots and danger zones are.
+Today Pete serves as the senior Doorman at the Classic. He likes to look out for and take care of the newcomers, pointing them to tourist spots, as well as keeping tabs on media reports about the latest exciting super-heroic hot spots and danger zones.
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+|origin       = {{LH}} [[{{LH}} No.1|#1]]
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-|intro        = The Senior Doormen at the [[Classic Hotel]].
+|intro        =
-|history      = A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] in 1988. He bounced around from odd job to odd job until he landed work as a Doormen at the Astro City [[Classic Hotel]]. Initially, he had neutral feelings about living in Astro City with all of the heroes, villains and other assorted supernatural happenings, until one night he wandered down the wrong alley. [[Ragged Tom]] and his [[Ragamuffins]] were ready to pounce on Pete, when the [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] came to his rescue. The incident shook Pete and he decided to hightail it out of Astro City once he had enough money to set down roots elsewhere.
+The Senior Doormen at the [[Classic Hotel]].
 [[image:PeteToTheRescue.jpg|500px|center]]
-But in 1991, on the verge of having the funds to leave, an ancient tribe of demi-gods called the [[Destructoids]] awoke and rampaged through Astro City. Pete saved a young girl from falling debris during the giant gods battle with [[Honor Guard]]. While it re-aggravated his old hockey injury and forced him to use a cane, the experience gave Pete a new insight about this metropolis called Astro City. In that moment, it had become '''his''' city and in a very special way.
+But in 1991, on the verge of having the funds to leave, an ancient tribe of demi-gods called the [[Destructoids]] awoke and rampaged through Astro City. Pete saved a young girl from falling debris during the giant demi-gods battle with [[Honor Guard]]. While it re-aggravated his old hockey injury and forced him to use a cane, the experience gave Pete a new insight about this metropolis called Astro City. In that moment, it had become '''his''' city and in a very special way.
 Today Pete serves as the senior Doorman at the Classic. He likes to look out for and take care of the newcomers to the city, pointing them to tourist spots as well as keeping tabs on media reports of where the hot spots and danger zones are.
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 But in 1991, on the verge of having the funds to leave, an ancient tribe of demi-gods called the [[Destructoids]] awoke and rampaged through Astro City. Pete saved a young girl from falling debris during the giant gods battle with [[Honor Guard]]. While it re-aggravated his old hockey injury and forced him to use a cane, the experience gave Pete a new insight about this metropolis called Astro City. In that moment, it had become '''his''' city and in a very special way.
-Today Pete serves as the senior Doormen at the Classic. He likes to look out for and take care of the newcomers to the city, pointing them to tourist spots as well as keeping tabs on media reports of where the hot spots and danger zones are.
+Today Pete serves as the senior Doorman at the Classic. He likes to look out for and take care of the newcomers to the city, pointing them to tourist spots as well as keeping tabs on media reports of where the hot spots and danger zones are.
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 |intro        = The Senior Doormen at the [[Classic Hotel]].
-|history      = A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] in 1988. He bounced around from odd job to odd job until he landed work as a Doormen at the Astro City [[Classic Hotel]]. Initially, he at neutral feelings about living in Astro City with all of the heroes, villains and other assorted supernatural happenings, until one night he wandered down the wrong alley. [[Ragged Tom]] and his [[Ragamuffins]] were ready to pounce on Pete, when the [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] came to his rescue. The incident shook Pete and he decided to hightail it out of Astro City once he had enough money to set down roots elsewhere.
+|history      = A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] in 1988. He bounced around from odd job to odd job until he landed work as a Doormen at the Astro City [[Classic Hotel]]. Initially, he had neutral feelings about living in Astro City with all of the heroes, villains and other assorted supernatural happenings, until one night he wandered down the wrong alley. [[Ragged Tom]] and his [[Ragamuffins]] were ready to pounce on Pete, when the [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] came to his rescue. The incident shook Pete and he decided to hightail it out of Astro City once he had enough money to set down roots elsewhere.
 [[image:PeteToTheRescue.jpg|500px|center]]

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-|intro        = A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] and stayed.
+|intro        = The senior bellman at the [[Classic Hotel]].
-|history      = Pete saved a young girl from falling debris during a battle with the [[Destructoids]] in 1991.
+|history      = A former minor league hockey player who moved to [[Astro City]] in 1988, who bounced around from odd job to odd job until he landed a job as a bellman at the Astro City [[Classic Hotel]]. At first he came to not mind living in Astro City with all of the heroes, villains and other assorted supernatural happenings, until one night he wandered down the wrong alley. [[Ragged Tom]] and his [[Ragamuffins]] were ready to pounce on Pete, when the [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] showed up and scared off the villainous felines. But Pete vowed to save up and hightail it out of Astro City.
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-A former minor league hockey player who moved to Astro City and stayed.
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